:SYE: Sweet Dreams

The coloring on the grass kind of bothers me, not that I could do even that much, but the coloring on the rest of it is simply amazing, especially on the left girl's skirt and legs. The coloring on the hair is marvelous, I hope you consider it worth the hard work, plus the coloring on their cheeks and lips are nice as well although the right girl's seem a little over -the-top fish-like, like one of those old-fashioned yaoi mangas but not as bad. The bullet bra kind of annoys me more on a personal level, and then the last thing I want to say is how in the world is that purple-haired girl's skirt still on her hips?! It's so low if she were to stand up it would immediately fall down! I know it's just supposed to be sexy, and the stomach area around there is fantastically realistic looking (how do you do that? ; A , but still, I just have to point that out XDD

*looks up and realizes she wrote a giant ass block of text without realizing it* //shot